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Fear

Fear



You have never understood fear,
that odd, ambiguous thing.


But sometimes you wonder if it is
that which comes with an all-


snagged falling into the not-
known, turning and black,


intrepid, grey, large, in your
dreams. –you wonder if it is


this feeling (cold, lingering)
on your back, on your skin;


that slight prickle on your
arm, all-lifting thing–that


rancid, acid breathing (its)–


                         on you.

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( 12caught suns — drop the sun into your palms )
avendya
Sep. 20th, 2007 05:11 pm (UTC)
I must say, I love this piece (even more than I love most of your pieces).
inevitably_grey
Sep. 20th, 2007 09:25 pm (UTC)
One of my favourites as well (having to move away from A Hunter's Lack of Sight and some other unposted ones). Really glad you liked it. And so happy to see you stepping by. *hugglesquishes*

I'm a bit busy with life, which you've probably noted. Can't wait to catch up with your life on lj.

Best,
James
silver_tears0
Sep. 20th, 2007 06:26 pm (UTC)
This is an excellent piece, James. I love it.

Kudos! *hugs*

-Debbie
inevitably_grey
Sep. 22nd, 2007 09:50 am (UTC)
Deb" *huggles*

Thank you! Don't know if you recognise it, but this is a revision (and a pretty good one, I think), from my QSQ Winner poem "The Raconteur".

Take care and I hope you're alright.
James
wanderlight
Sep. 22nd, 2007 05:32 pm (UTC)
I really love this poem, James -- especially the use of brackets. :)
inevitably_grey
Oct. 21st, 2007 09:01 am (UTC)
Wow. I've been gone for some time now. Will try to get back.

Thank you! *huggles*
wanderlight
Oct. 21st, 2007 04:41 pm (UTC)
Not a problem. :) Have you just been busy with school, etc.?
inevitably_grey
Nov. 6th, 2007 08:23 pm (UTC)
WOW. I'm so sorry. (Really bad at LJ right now.)


I saw you've signed up for NaNo. What's you're username? Mine is "muscular music". Got any far with your novel?


Hee. Actually, no that much. I was on a two-week trip to Spain, and then just sort of didn't come back to LJ. Tried to, but didn't manage. Trying very hard to get back right now. :/

I have so much to catch up with. And I stiiill need to give you those poetry examples. Procrastination, anyone? XD
wanderlight
Nov. 7th, 2007 01:23 am (UTC)
I'm Archetypist -- I shall add you if I can ever get the damn site to work for me! :D

Not a problem -- I know all too well the pitfalls of procrastination! But ooh, Spain! How was that?
invisibleforest
Oct. 16th, 2007 09:18 pm (UTC)
james, i love your poetry. this one is simple magnificent; the atmosphere it produces and the imagery that it there is simply breathtaking.

-tish suzie/crazy_purple_hp_freak from mnff.

friend me? :)

<3
inevitably_grey
Oct. 21st, 2007 09:01 am (UTC)
Thank you

and Of course. ;)
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